This is a song i wrote myself i would just like to know what you all think about it?

I am standing here looking at the lost child that hide deep within me. The mirror i hate it. I see this person looking back at me that i hate.
Hating everything i see looking into it. I think of how i lost you and grip my hands as tight as i can. Cause i hate when your gone and i know its not going to be for long.

Chorus:
So I... shattered the glass, blooded my hands, let my tears fall for just one last time. i hated it all the mirror image looking back at me and i scream it out loud i hate you looking into that simple mirror.

I wouldn't look into that mirror for months knowing all i would see was a face stained with tears and blood. Till that day when i looked and felt so shamed of myself. You were gone and no one could change my mind i said you would come back. But all i gave meself in return were morbid lies.

Chrous: So I... shattered the glass, blooded my hands, let my tears fall for just one last time. i hated it all the mirror image looking back at me and i scream it out loud i hate you looking into that simple mirror.

I know your gone and not coming back to me and i hate it. I still see your face in my dreams and i love you but hate myself for always bringing myself down...down....bringing myself down.

Chrous(2x): So I... shattered the glass, blooded my hands, let my tears fall for just one last time. i hated it all the mirror image looking back at me and i scream it out loud i hate you looking into that simple mirror.

I love you...i need you...all i ever gave myself were morbid lies...morbid lies.

i was upset when i wrote that song so don't worry

No offense, but I don't find it very original...

Props for being able to write an entire song though, I can never seem to get more than a few lines...

thank u...yeah everyone says that but i still like it

Sorry, I just have a thing against negative lyrics...even though that's what almost all popular music is today...but cheers to you being able to write a whole songs worth of lyrics...anyone whom can do that has talent.

What kind of music would you put with that song?

I think you should try to sell it to Seether.