Here is another one o yay, Negative hate always welcome :)

Open....
The....
Door

Purple shadows, What? Hold the thoughts in
Too much sleep. What? Drink the beer
Its cold in here, wheres here? Whos with me.
Tick Tock tick tock tick Tock fake.

Maybe i wont, shit Im sure ive been here
Same red wall, damn i know that chair
Collect the thoughts, work with me maybe,
somethings going, gone... Hmmm

Its a line...

Maybe...

Stepped up looked out, grass is greener.
Well thats the media weight off my mind.
Open the window, nah the door wont let me
Its like my mother, only more in time.

"Hello"

O not again, i thought id said noone past half past ten
I swear they do this to all their patients
Lock the door, o great its gone again.
Nurse? Husband? Wife? o ok ...just me then.

Close...
The...
Door...

But i cant haha haha haha HA
No really sir my dad said no this time.
If they all find out im sure thats it for you
Apparently he can read our minds.

Trick the trickster from his bag of tricks
Man when he finds out will he be pissed
But i guess thats ok, ill reset the clock.
Concrete perception will always rot

Open the door again, i know its like that
You can close it if you want, fine go ahead.
Is it? Really? Thats cool i guess,
Door closed forever, so i guess thats the end.

Am I on something or is that just weird?

Originally posted by DarkFantasy96
Am I on something or is that just weird?

i got lost half way in it and had to kick my way out.
its odd....i dont know if its good or not, all i know right now is odd

lol, desired effect achieved so im happy enough

Cheers guys for reading it though, honestly appriciated